Hey guys!
I have various ideas on how to continue the story. However, there are two issues I am facing in continuation.
First is the narration.
I thought that simply narrating from Souta's perspective would be sufficient. However, I realize now that this way of narration will make things tedious and restrictive. So, occasionally, I would change narrators from MC to other characters or third person, simply put, me.
The second issue is the pacing.
There is no denying the current pace is way too slow to matter. But, there are so many cool things I want to show, and they require subtle ploys that need to be displayed over time. As such, I would like to know if you like the pacing I have shown until now, or not.
Thanks!!!
(Also, I have not run away from the story.)