Ok, so I asked for ideas and most of yall are giving ideas about the shootout. But like I said, I already wrote that part of the chapter. And it's like very small.
So now, idc if I'm spoiling the next chap, because I need ideas.
She doesn't get shot. She's a CBI. She's literally trained for these type situations. I've already written that like I said in the earlier AN. But I have no idea how to proceed with that scene. Like how to show section E's reaction to their clumsy mutya being a badass? Or like kiefers reaction to how the girl he thought was protecting, was actually the one protecting them too?
Like I'm blank.
So I have 2 options.
1) Y'all give me ideas and I'll brainstorm too, and somehow I'll come up with an idea to proceed and continue the chapter after the shootout in the same setting.
Or...
2) I could end the chapter with Jay saving everyone, and then just leave it at that and go on to the next scene (the restaurant scene with honey and percy where kiefer confesses and then leaves to london) in another chapter.
BUT, if I go with option 2 then I feel like it would mess with the continuity of the story yk? Like that chapter that scene would feel incomplete?
So tell me which option I should go with. Either way, I'll be posting another chap 2day.
Ok byeee... help me out here.