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Trapped in a Dating-Sim: Storm and Eclipse

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The story follows the adventures of twin brothers, Leon and Lex fou Bartfort, who are reincarnated into a harsh, female-dominated fantasy world based on an Otome Game that Leon's sister forced him to play in his previous life. They possess unique, celestial powers, the "Graces" of Storm and Eclipse, which operate outside the norm of the world's magic system. I Just Came from rewatching Trapped in a Dating-Sim And seeing there is no fan-fix about it couldn't help but imagine writing one and when I did the ideas couldn't stop coming I even have a full story board. PS IM NOT A LIT STUDENT SO PLEASE DON'T GIVE ME GRIEF ABOUT MY GRAMMAR AND SPELLINGS, IF YOU CAN UNDERSTAND WHAT WAS SUPPOSED TO TO WRITTEN KUDOS TO YOU Give me power stones quick before I start to think that no one wants to read my work and quit early cause I swear I will.
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1 (REWRITE) :- Celestials

Chapter 1 :- Celestials

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Celestial Hall

Omni POV

In a world of never-ending white, a red figure sat upon a throne as it stared into the white void, it then raised its hand as beautiful streams of red energy flowed from it and into the white void.

After a while, the being showed an expression of surprise.

"This world is about to experience a great change, it seems," the giant figure said to itself.

He then spoke to the void in front of him, "I call for a Celestial Meeting… Something peculiar has happened," before he captured his words in a ball of energy. It then split into six different balls of energy and flew off into the void.

Next, the figure leaned back into its throne and added nostalgically, "It's been a few millennia since I last saw my siblings, I wonder how they are doing."

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We don't know exactly when it was that a second giant figure appeared, as time was immeasurable in the void.

"Solvath!!!" the new figure, shrouded in yellow, shouted enthusiastically the moment it appeared.

"I missed you, big brother. How have you been? How come you never visited me before? How's the house? How are the..." the new figure asked in quick succession, and she would have continued if Solvath didn't stop her rant.

"How have you been, Lumiel? It's nice to see you haven't changed," Solvath said as he rubbed his sister's hair.

At first, Lumiel leaned into her brother's touch, but after a while she couldn't contain her restless nature as she looked around the hall for the rest of their siblings.

Seeing there was no one else there, she asked, "Where is everyone?"

"They aren't here yet, you are the first one here."

Hearing his response, the smile on Lumiel's face grew even brighter. "So you're telling me I was faster than that stick-in-the-mud Pyraxis?"

"You are too happy for something that insignificant," Solvath said.

"How can I not be? That big buffoon has always had it out for me, saying stuff like how I should set a good example in front of our younger siblings and act my age and stuff," she ended that conversation with a huff.

"Hahahaha, no matter how many times you say you hate him, I sense no hatred in your words, which means you don't mean what you say," Solvath said teasingly.

"Hey! You should never spill a lady's secrets, brother," she said as she playfully hit him in the chest.

At that moment, figures of orange, green, blue, indigo, and violet appeared in that order.

"Pyraxis," Solvath greeted his brother, who was leading the rest of their siblings in his preferred greeting method.

"Brother," Pyraxis returned the greeting before looking at his sister, the third-born of the family who still acted as if she was the youngest, and saw a big grin on her face as if to say, 'I got here first.'

Deciding not to open the can of worms that was his sister, Pyraxis just gave her a simple, "Sister."

Lumiel, on the other hand, seeing that her brother was not taking the bait, didn't offer a greeting back but just turned her head away with her cheeks puffed out.

"Sorry for the late arrival, brother, I first had to pick up our younger siblings," Pyraxis offered an explanation as to why he wasn't the first to respond to the message.

"No need for an apology, brother, I am happy to see your love for our family," Solvath said.

"Hey, why didn't you come to pick me up, Pyraxis? Aren't I your sister too?" Turning around to Solvath, she threw herself into his arms and added, "Brother, I'm no longer wanted in this family," she whined with fake tears in her eyes.

"Would you please stop? You're making a scene, and I went to your domain, sister. It was the first place I visited, but you weren't there," Pyraxis clarified.

With all eyes now on her, Lumiel stuck her tongue out, her hand at the side of her head, and said, "I just wanted to see my big brother so much, so the moment I received his message I rushed over here, TEHE."

Leaving the comedic act that was his second and third siblings, Solvath faced the rest of the family.

"Verdyra, I'm glad to see you so vibrant," he spoke to the fourth-born and second sister of the family.

"Same to you, brother."

"Aethros, how have the oceans been treating you?" he asked as he faced the fifth-born, who was the hardhead of the family—which was kind of ironic considering his element was water.

"They have been too soft for my taste as of late, brother."

"That's because you're a muscle brain," the indigo figure, Noctyss, said.

"What was that, you narcissistic bastard?" Aethros fired back.

"You heard me, you giant gorilla, or did you trade in your brain for those ugly muscles?"

"Come now, Noctyss, let's not start a fight. You too, Aethros," Solvath placated them.

""Sorry, brother."" they both said.

Now facing the last-born of the family and the third sister, a figure of violet—

"I'm so tired, can I please go to sleep Soli?" the figure spoke with a yawn before Solvath could say anything.

"Not yet, Nyxara, but we will be done soon, so wait for just a bit."

Now facing his whole family Solvath said "Okay, let us begin"

Now in a circle, Solvath began—

[In The Name Of Solvath The First, God Of Energy, Emperor Of The World, The Origin Held In Shackles, He Who Watches The VOID, He Who Governs the source of light, Red Of The Beginning, I Offer Up]

A ball of red light came out of him and floated to the center of the circle; he then stepped forward as he shed his silhouette, and his true form was revealed—a giant man on fire who produced enough light to cover all of existence.

Next up was Pyraxis.

[In The Name Of Pyraxis The Second, God Of Ember, King Of Knights, He Who Is Forever Unmoving, Protector Of The Earth, Orange Of Stability, I offer up]

Like Solvath, he released a ball of light; when his silhouette was removed, it showed a giant man in a knight's armour, helmet held in hand, as he radiated the principles of knighthood.

Lumiel was next.

[In The Name Of Lumiel The Third, Angel of Hope, Queen of Freedom, Mother Of Holy Light, She Who Strives Forward, Yellow Of Tomorrow, I Offer Up]

She turned out to be a six-winged archangel who radiated pure beauty.

Verdyra.

[In The Name Of Verdyra The Fourth, Goddess of Flora, Queen of Bloom, Mother of Life, She Who Brings Peace, Green Of Life, I Offer Up]

She was a giant woman covered in vines, leaves, and flowers as she radiated the love of nature.

Aethros.

[In The Name Of Aethros The Fifth, God Of War, King Of The Oceans, Father Of The Rising Tides, He Who Ever-Rages, Blue Of The Ever-Changing Tides, I Offer Up]

He was a giant, muscular man who looked like he was made for battle.

Noctyss.

[In The Name Of Noctyss The Sixth, God Of Storms, King Of The Never-ending Winds, Holder Of The Sky, He Whose Beauty Blinds All, Indigo Of The Gentle Breeze, I Offer Up]

A giant man who was the definition of beauty, with wind constantly swirling around him.

Nyxara.

[In The Name Of Nyxara The Seventh, Goddess Of The Afterlife, Queen Of Death, The Sleeping Mother Of Evernight, She Who Protects The Peace Of Slumber, Violet Of The End, I Offer Up]

A woman encased within a clock, surrounded by a shadowy aura.

When the last of the Celestials offered up half of their energy, it combined before flying into Solvath, his form changed before he added

[In the name of Aurelion Lux, The VOID, Origin Of The World, The Father Of Light, He Who Fights The Darkness, The Unshackled Light, I Receive]

His form turned into an old man with a hunched back but radiated an aura without equal.

Aurelion Lux conjured a table before sitting at the head. He tapped on it as he said, "Let us begin," in a cold, detached voice far removed from Solvath's soft, caring tone.

"Yes, Father!" the rest of the Celestials said in perfect unison as they sat down.

You could tell that Aurelion Lux had changed the aura in the room because even Lumiel had dropped her ever-present smile.

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I am writing my A Levels this year so I'm already stumped and if you add the time I use writing I think I'm entitled to POWER STONES sooooooo give them to me

P.S

Let it be known that the Story is undergoing a Rewrite, hence if you read the unedited chapters its on you, they are no longer part of the story.