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On a pleasant Sunday, three young women—Ina, Meena, and Deeka—were sitting together in a lawn, carefully going through photographs and biodata sent by their parents to help them choose their life partners. Each profile included detailed family backgrounds, character descriptions, likes, dislikes, and personal qualities of the boys.
After thoughtful discussion, they finally made their choices.
Ina selected Aman.
Meena chose Aarav.
Deeka selected Adi.
All three boys came from well-established business families with strong connections both in India and abroad. Their family businesses had been running since their great-grandfathers' time, and they were all highly educated.
Deeka's father reviewed the selected profiles and advised that the final decision would require proper verification. He explained that their parents would personally visit the boys' families, spend time with them, and understand their nature before confirming anything. This process, he said, would take about a week.
Meanwhile, on the following Friday, the girls received another piece of wonderful news—their MBA results were announced. All three secured outstanding positions and ranked first. At college, they were warmly congratulated by their principal, lecturers, and friends.
When they returned home, Deeka's father had arranged a grand surprise celebration. He invited friends, business associates, and staff, and hosted a lavish evening party. The event featured a wide variety of cuisines including Italian, Chinese, Mughlai, and European dishes.
Ina, Meena, and Deeka wore elegant light-colored gowns in shades of green and pink, looking graceful and radiant like royal queens. During the function, they each gave a speech, expressing their happiness and gratitude. They shared how they had studied in India until their intermediate level and later moved abroad to complete their master's degrees. They also acknowledged Deeka's father for his constant support and guidance.
The entire event was recorded, and their families in India watched the celebration live. At the end of the function, the girls distributed gifts to younger students invited from their college.
Later, the recorded videos were shown to the families of Aman, Aarav, and Adi. The boys' families were deeply impressed by the girls—their confidence, education, and graceful behavior. The boys' mothers especially admired them and happily expressed their willingness to accept the girls as their daughters-in-law.
Both families agreed to meet in person in India before finalizing everything. They planned to arrange a small gathering to formally introduce both sides and then proceed with the wedding arrangements.
Back in Chicago, everyone was filled with happiness. The girls had successfully completed their studies, and their marriages were soon to be arranged. Deeka's father informed his staff and employees—around 40 to 50 people—that the weddings would be held within 15 to 16 days after their arrival in India. He instructed them to continue managing responsibilities in Chicago just as before, as the girls would return after a couple of months.
Everything was progressing smoothly, and both families looked forward to a joyful new
