Hey everyone, I want to make this novel more interesting and improve it as much as possible.
Please tell me honestly:
What part feels boring?
Which chapters feel slow?
Are there any mistakes in names, powers, or story logic?
Do any character names feel too Chinese or unnatural?
Are there any repeated scenes or chapters that feel too similar?
I will use your feedback to fix mistakes, improve the flow, make the story more exciting, and make future chapters better.
Thank you for reading and supporting the novel!