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Chapter 44 - THE NEGOTIATION LOOP.

**EPISODE FORTY-SIX**

**THE NEGOTIATION LOOP**

*(When comfort learns to imitate wisdom)*

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1. THE NEXT MORNING

Nobody mentioned resistance.

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2. WHICH WAS SUSPICIOUS

Because everyone was thinking about it.

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3. MILO NOTICES FIRST

"Something feels different."

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4. DIANA LOOKS UP

"How?"

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5. MILO THINKS

"The excuses are quieter."

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6. GANDALF NODS

"They've adapted."

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7. TARZAN FREEZES

"The squirrels evolved."

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8. NO ONE ACKNOWLEDGES HIM

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9. THE NEW PROBLEM

The resistance no longer sounded lazy.

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10. IT SOUNDED WISE

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11. MEERA DISCOVERS IT

She opened her notebook.

Prepared to work.

Then stopped.

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12. WHY?

A thought appeared.

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13. THE THOUGHT

*"You should reflect more before acting."*

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14. IT SOUNDED REASONABLE

Very reasonable.

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15. SO REASONABLE

She spent forty minutes reflecting.

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16. RESULT

Nothing happened.

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17. THE REALIZATION

She had not reflected.

She had delayed.

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18. MEERA LOOKS HORRIFIED

"It's learning my vocabulary."

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19. THE ROOM GOES QUIET

Because everyone understood immediately.

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20. ARJUN EXPERIENCES HIS VERSION

A project sat unfinished.

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21. HE KNEW WHAT TO DO

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22. YET HE DIDN'T START

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23. WHY?

A thought appeared.

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24. THE THOUGHT

*"Preparation creates excellence."*

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25. SO HE PREPARED

And prepared.

And prepared.

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26. THREE HOURS LATER

The project remained untouched.

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27. DIANA WRITES SOMETHING DOWN

"Optimization avoidance."

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28. ARJUN WINCES

"That sounds personal."

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29. GANDALF SIPS TEA

"Because it is."

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30. THE PATTERN EMERGES

Comfort had evolved.

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31. IT NO LONGER SAID

"Don't do it."

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32. NOW IT SAID

"Do it later."

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33. TARZAN GASPS

"The enemy has discovered grammar."

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34. EVERYONE STARES

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35. TARZAN CONTINUES

"Previously it used blunt weapons."

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36. HE GESTURES DRAMATICALLY

"Now it uses diplomacy."

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37. GANDALF PAUSES

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38. THEN NODS

"Disturbingly accurate."

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39. TARZAN SMILES

"I am becoming powerful."

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40. DIANA WRITES

**RESISTANCE 2.0**

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41. UNDERNEATH SHE ADDS

**NEGOTIATION**

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42. MILO READS IT

"What exactly is negotiation?"

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43. DIANA EXPLAINS

"It is when discomfort proposes a compromise."

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44. EXAMPLE

"You don't need to quit."

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45. PAUSE

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46. THEN

"Just postpone."

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47. EVERYONE GROANS

Because they knew that voice.

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48. MEERA SPEAKS

"It never sounds dangerous."

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49. GANDALF NODS

"That's the point."

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50. THE EXPERIMENT BEGINS

Diana draws another diagram.

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51. THE LOOP

**ACTION**

**DISCOMFORT**

**NEGOTIATION**

**DELAY**

**RELIEF**

**REPEAT**

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52. THE ROOM STUDIES IT

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53. MILO FROWNS

"That's depressing."

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54. GANDALF SHRUGS

"Most accurate diagrams are."

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55. TARZAN SQUINTS

At the board.

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56. THEN ADDS SOMETHING

A squirrel.

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57. DIANA CLOSES HER EYES

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58. TARZAN DEFENDS HIMSELF

"It improves scientific clarity."

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59. IT DID NOT

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60. THE DEEPER QUESTION APPEARS

Why negotiate at all?

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61. THE ANSWER ARRIVES

Because direct resistance fails once noticed.

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62. GANDALF EXPLAINS

"When force fails..."

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63. HE TAKES A SIP

"...subtlety replaces it."

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64. ARJUN UNDERSTANDS

"So the mind changes strategy."

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65. DIANA NODS

"Exactly."

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66. THE OLD SELF ADAPTS

Not because it is evil.

Because it wants survival.

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67. TARZAN RAISES A HAND

"What if the old self has lawyers?"

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68. SILENCE

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69. THEN MILO SPEAKS

"I hate that I know what you mean."

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70. TARZAN BEAMS

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71. THE COURTROOM VISUALIZATION BEGINS

Without anyone asking for it.

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72. TARZAN STANDS ON A CHAIR

"The Court of Excuses is now in session."

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73. DIANA RUBS HER FOREHEAD

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74. TOO LATE

The performance had started.

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75. TARZAN PLAYS THE LAWYER

"Your Honor..."

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76. HE POINTS AT MILO

"My client deserves rest."

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77. MILO OBJECTS

"I rested yesterday."

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78. TARZAN RESPONDS

"Precisely."

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79. EVERYONE BLINKS

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80. TARZAN CONTINUES

"He should recover from resting."

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81. GANDALF NEARLY DROPS HIS TEA

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82. MEERA STARTS LAUGHING

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83. THE ABSURDITY HITS

Because it wasn't entirely wrong.

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84. EXCUSES OFTEN SOUND LOGICAL

Until examined closely.

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85. THE DISCOVERY

Negotiation survives through vagueness.

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86. DIANA WRITES THIS DOWN

**CLARITY KILLS NEGOTIATION**

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87. ARJUN READS IT

"What does that mean?"

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88. DIANA ANSWERS

"If a thought survives scrutiny..."

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89. PAUSE

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90. "...it may be wisdom."

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91. ANOTHER PAUSE

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92. "...if it collapses under specifics..."

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93. SHE POINTS TO THE BOARD

"...it was negotiation."

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94. THE ROOM GOES SILENT

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95. SOMETHING CLICKS

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96. MEERA TESTS IT

"I should start tomorrow."

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97. DIANA ASKS

"Why tomorrow?"

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98. MEERA PAUSES

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99. THEN BLINKS

"I don't know."

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100. GANDALF SMILES

"Exactly."

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101. THE MASK SLIPS

Negotiation hates questions.

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102. TARZAN WRITES FURIOUSLY

**INTERROGATE THE SQUIRRELS**

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103. NO ONE STOPS HIM

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104. THE FINAL INSIGHT APPROACHES

Comfort is intelligent.

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105. VERY INTELLIGENT

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106. IT CAN QUOTE PHILOSOPHY

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107. IT CAN USE SELF-CARE

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108. IT CAN WEAR WISDOM'S CLOTHES

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109. BUT IT HAS ONE WEAKNESS

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110. ACTION

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111. GANDALF SPEAKS SOFTLY

"Reality reveals what thinking conceals."

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112. MEERA NODS

"You learn by moving."

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113. ARJUN ADDS

"Not by negotiating endlessly."

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114. DIANA FINISHES

"Evidence beats imagination."

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115. TARZAN RAISES A FINGER

"And goats beat evidence."

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116. EVERYONE GROANS

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117. TARZAN SMILES

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118. THE WORLD CONTINUES OUTSIDE

Cars moved.

People hurried.

Coffee cooled.

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119. ORDINARY LIFE

Unchanged.

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120. YET SOMETHING HAD SHIFTED

A hidden mechanism had become visible.

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121. THE NEXT NEGOTIATION ARRIVED

As it always would.

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122. BUT THIS TIME

They recognized the lawyer.

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123. AND RECOGNITION CHANGED EVERYTHING

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124. THE FINAL LINE APPEARED

Not as revelation.

Not as magic.

But as simple truth:

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**COMFORT NEVER SAYS "NO"**

**IT ASKS FOR "LATER"**

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**EPISODE FORTY-SEVEN**

**THE COMFORT MASQUERADE**

*(When avoidance begins quoting philosophy, psychology, and productivity podcasts)*

1. THREE DAYS LATER

The negotiations had become sophisticated.

Dangerously sophisticated.

Not because resistance had become stronger.

Because it had become educated.

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2. MILO DISCOVERS THIS FIRST

He sat at his desk.

Laptop open.

Project waiting.

Deadline approaching.

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3. EVERYTHING WAS READY

The documents.

The notes.

The plan.

The coffee.

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4. YET NOTHING HAPPENED

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5. WHY?

A thought appeared.

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6. THE THOUGHT

*"Flow cannot be forced."*

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7. MILO FREEZES

That sounded wise.

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8. EXTREMELY WISE

The kind of thing successful people posted online.

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9. SO HE WAITED

For flow.

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10. FLOW DID NOT ARRIVE

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11. TWO HOURS PASSED

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12. THEN ANOTHER THOUGHT APPEARED

*"Honor your natural rhythm."*

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13. MILO NODDED

Yes.

That sounded intelligent.

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14. VERY INTELLIGENT

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15. THREE MORE HOURS PASSED

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16. NO WORK OCCURRED

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17. THE HORRIFYING REALIZATION

Comfort had discovered self-help content.

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18. THE EMERGENCY MEETING

Was called immediately.

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19. EVERYONE GATHERED

Around the table.

Again.

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20. TARZAN ARRIVED LAST

Holding three bananas.

A compass.

And what appeared to be a fishing net.

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21. DIANA LOOKED CONCERNED

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22. "WHY?"

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23. TARZAN ANSWERED

"I am prepared."

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24. "FOR WHAT?"

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25. TARZAN LOWERED HIS VOICE

"The masquerade."

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26. SILENCE

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27. GANDALF TOOK A LONG SIP OF TEA

The kind of sip people take when reality becomes exhausting.

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28. MILO PRESENTED THE PROBLEM

"The excuses are changing."

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29. DIANA NODDED

"I've noticed."

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30. MEERA SPOKE

"They don't sound like excuses anymore."

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31. ARJUN AGREED

"They sound like wisdom."

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32. THE ROOM GREW QUIET

Because that was exactly the issue.

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33. RESISTANCE HAD LEARNED A NEW TRICK

It had stolen the language of growth.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Written By,

Ivan Edwin

Pen Name :Maximus.

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