Chapter 51: The Battle of Razorpeak — Part 1
Razorpeak was worse than the reports suggested.
The orc fortress rose from the mountain pass like something grown rather than built—natural stone formations reinforced with crude but effective walls, defensive rings layered three deep, overlapping fields of fire that would turn any approach into a killing ground.
"They've been building this for years." Maeglin's voice carried professional assessment despite the grim subject. "The foundations are old. Decades, maybe centuries. Someone's been preparing."
I studied the fortress through a captured orc spyglass, counting battlements and trying to estimate troop concentrations. The orcs were visible on the walls—thousands of them, their armor glinting in the morning light, their war banners snapping in the mountain wind.
"Grishnak." The word came from Thorin, who'd joined me on the observation ridge. "I've heard that name before. An orc captain who served at Gundabad in my grandfather's time. We thought he was dead."
"Apparently not."
"Orcs have long memories for grudges. If this is the same Grishnak, he's been planning revenge for fifty years." The dwarf spat. "Patient for his kind. That makes him dangerous."
The war council convened on the ridge, commanders studying the fortress from concealment while scouts reported on approaches and defensive positions.
"Frontal assault is impossible." Glorfindel's assessment was delivered without emotion. "Those kill zones would cost us half our force before we reached the first wall. Possibly more."
"Siege would take months." Halbarad the Younger had been running calculations. "We don't have supply lines for that duration. They do—the mountain passes connect to orc territories deeper in the range."
"Then we make them come out." Tauriel stepped to the map, tracing routes with one finger. "Here, here, and here—their foraging routes. They need food like any army. We cut those routes, burn their supplies, make holding the fortress untenable."
"Provocation." Thorin nodded slowly. "Orcs don't handle frustration well. Hit them enough times, they'll come out fighting."
"And when they do?"
"We'll be ready."
[THE RIDGE — PLANNING]
The strategy took shape over hours of debate.
The main force—five hundred warriors under my direct command—would establish a fortified position at the pass's narrowest point. Dwarven engineers would construct defensive works: trenches, stakes, positions for the siege engines. We'd create a killing ground of our own, turning the orcs' advantage against them.
Meanwhile, three raiding parties would harass the orc supply lines. Rangers under Halbarad the Younger, striking from the north. Elves under Glorfindel, moving through terrain humans couldn't navigate. And a mixed force under Gorlim, hitting the southern approaches.
"Hit and run," I instructed the raiding commanders. "Don't engage superior forces. Kill foragers, burn supplies, disappear before they can respond. Make them angry, not victorious."
"And if they pursue?"
"Lead them toward our main position. Let them run into prepared defenses while tired from chasing you."
The plan had risks. Every plan had risks. But it played to our strengths—Ranger mobility, Elven speed, dwarven engineering—while forcing the orcs to abandon their own advantages.
"They'll figure out what we're doing eventually," Tom Ferny observed. "Orcs aren't completely stupid."
"No, but they're proud. When their warriors start dying to raiding parties they can't catch, when their supplies burn while they watch from walls they won't leave—pride will override caution." I remembered everything I knew about orc psychology from Oliver's memories. "They'll come out. They have to. Their whole culture is built around strength and conquest. Hiding behind walls while we prick at them is humiliation they can't accept."
"And if we're wrong?"
"Then we'll adapt. But I don't think we're wrong."
[THE FORTIFIED POSITION — CONSTRUCTION]
The defensive works went up faster than I'd expected.
Dwarven engineers worked with methodical precision, directing human laborers through construction techniques refined over millennia. Trenches dug at precise depths. Stakes positioned at calculated angles. Fields of fire measured and cleared with scientific accuracy.
"Your people learn quickly." Thorin had been supervising the ballista emplacements, ensuring each weapon had clear targeting arcs. "Better than most humans I've worked with."
"They're motivated. Nothing focuses attention like the possibility of death."
"Ha! That's a dwarven sentiment." Almost a smile cracked his permanent scowl. "Maybe there's hope for your kind after all."
The position took shape over three days. Not a fortress—we didn't have time for that—but something formidable. The pass was narrow here, barely two hundred yards across, with steep slopes on either side. Any force attacking would have to funnel through that narrow space, where our archers could thin them and our infantry could hold.
"The siege engines?" I asked Thorin.
"Positioned on the flanks. They'll fire over the main line into the enemy mass. Ballista bolts punch through orc armor like parchment. Catapult stones break formations." He gestured at the killing ground before our position. "When they charge across that open space, we'll reap them like wheat."
If they charge. If the provocation works. If everything goes according to plan.
Too many ifs. But it was the best strategy we had.
[THE OBSERVATION POINT — NIGHT]
I climbed to the highest point of our position after sunset, watching the distant glow of Razorpeak's torches.
Two thousand orcs. Maybe more. Waiting in their fortress, watching us dig in, calculating their own strategies. Somewhere in there, Grishnak was making plans of his own—fifty years of patience about to be tested.
"You should sleep." Tauriel had followed me, as she always did when I sought solitude.
"I can't. Not tonight."
"Tomorrow then. The first raids begin tomorrow. You'll need your strength."
"I know." I kept watching the distant lights. "I've been in battles before. I've seen people die under my command. But this... this is different."
"Different how?"
"The scale. The stakes. Everything we've built depends on what happens here." I turned to face her, finding her ancient eyes reflecting starlight. "If we lose, Northwatch falls. The settlements burn. Everyone who trusted me dies."
"If you lose," she said quietly, "I die with you. That's not nothing."
"That's supposed to comfort me?"
"It's supposed to remind you that you're not alone. That whatever happens, you face it with people who chose to stand beside you." She took my hand. "You've built something remarkable, Aldric. Win or lose, that doesn't change."
"Glorfindel said something similar."
"Glorfindel has seen kingdoms rise and fall. He knows that what matters is the attempt, not just the outcome." Her grip tightened. "You've united four races against a common enemy. You've built alliances that should have been impossible. That matters, regardless of what happens tomorrow."
I wanted to believe her. Wanted to take comfort in the achievement, separate from the result.
But I was mortal. I measured success in lives saved, not legends created.
"Help me pray," I said.
"To whom?"
"I don't know. Whatever watches. Whatever cares." I'd never been religious—not as Oliver, not as Aldric. But standing on the edge of battle, facing death on a scale I'd never imagined, something in me reached outward. "Just... help me pray."
She didn't argue. Didn't question. Just stood beside me, her ancient presence somehow comforting, and together we faced the darkness.
The words that came weren't formal prayers. Just hopes, expressed into the night air. Let them survive. Let the plan work. Let the dying be worth something.
No voice answered. No sign appeared. But somehow, the act itself provided what I needed.
"Thank you," I said finally.
"For what?"
"For being here. For staying, when you could have walked away at any point in the last six years."
"Walk away from you?" Something flickered in her expression—amusement, affection, something deeper. "Never. Not now. Not ever."
We descended from the observation point together. Tomorrow the raids would begin. Tomorrow the provocation would start. Tomorrow, we'd learn whether strategy could overcome numbers.
But tonight, at least, I wasn't alone.
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