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Chapter 67 - End of story...

Burned-tomatoes.

Unfortunately I have decided to end the book as there are too many flaws in the story from the age of the characters, to the powerscaling pacing.

Rewriting the story.

1. Ramos will be Rogue's older brother.

2. Around Shank's age.

3. Lowkey a prodigy because of the D lineage.

4. Own characters from this story will be used but in detail.

5. Not changing the harem, too bad.

Pls comment on these suggestions.

#1 Should Ramos have Conqueror's haki?

#2 Should get be a brawler or a swordsman important for his rival.

#3 Should we gender swap Doflamingo and Smoker or stick to canon?

Thank you for all your support, I hope you enjoy the new story.

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