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Chapter 83 - chapter 83 loki meeting ben

Screen 1 — XLR8 Meets Loki

The group moves along a massive bridge deep in Elbaf, guided by the giants.

Suddenly—

Monkey D. Luffy stops, looks down into the dense forest below… and grins.

Luffy:

"Something's down there."

Before anyone can react—

He jumps.

Straight off the bridge.

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Ben reacts instantly.

Ben:

"Of course you would…"

He slams the Omnitrix mid-run.

"XLR8!"

XLR8 appears in a flash and dives after Luffy at extreme speed, spiraling down through the trees.

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Deep in the forest

The atmosphere changes.

Dark.

Quiet.

Heavy.

XLR8 lands beside Luffy in a blur.

XLR8:

"You don't do normal paths, do you?"

Luffy just smiles.

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Then—

They both stop.

A presence ahead.

Cold.

Watching.

From the shadows, a figure slowly appears.

Loki.

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XLR8 freezes for a split second.

Not from fear—

From instinct.

XLR8:

"…This guy…"

Even at high speed perception, Ben feels it immediately:

controlled presence

dangerous calm

not like normal enemies

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Luffy grins wider.

Luffy:

"You're strong, huh?"

XLR8 doesn't move forward.

Instead, he circles slightly, analyzing.

XLR8 (low voice):

"…Luffy. This one's different."

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Ben's reaction

For the first time in Elbaf:

not confusion

not curiosity

But real caution.

Ben thinking:

> "That's not a 'toy world' enemy…

this is something real."

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This sets Loki apart instantly as a higher-tier presence.

Screen 2 — Loki Notices XLR8

Deep within the forest of Elbaf, the air feels heavy.

A massive tree rises into the sky—

The Great Adam Treasure Tree.

At its base, chained with massive restraints, stands Loki.

Sea-stone shackles bind him tightly.

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Monkey D. Luffy walks forward casually.

Luffy:

"Whoa… you're huge."

Loki slowly lifts his head.

Loki:

"…Six years."

His voice is calm but carries weight.

Loki:

"I've been here for six years."

The timing clicks with major world events.

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Beside Luffy, XLR8 stands still.

Watching.

Analyzing.

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Loki's eyes shift.

Not to Luffy.

To XLR8.

He pauses.

Longer than expected.

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Loki:

"…You."

There's clear curiosity.

Not hostility.

Something else.

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Loki studies XLR8 carefully.

His gaze sharpens.

Loki:

"You're not human."

XLR8 doesn't move.

XLR8:

"…Yeah. Not exactly."

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Loki leans slightly forward despite the chains.

The shackles tighten.

But he ignores it.

Loki:

"That form… that body…"

He narrows his eyes.

Loki:

"It doesn't belong to this world."

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For the first time, someone sees through it instantly.

Not like others who just react.

He understands the difference.

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XLR8 circles slightly, keeping distance.

XLR8:

"…You're pretty sharp for someone locked up."

Loki gives a faint smile.

Loki:

"I've had time to observe."

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Loki's reaction to XLR8

recognizes alien nature immediately

not confused

not scared

interested

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Ben's reaction

Inside, Ben realizes:

> "This guy notices things others don't…"

That puts Loki in a different category.

Not just strong—

aware.

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This scene works really well because:

Luffy = casual

XLR8 = analytical

Loki = perceptive

Three very different energies in one moment.

Screen 3 — Ben Reveals Himself, Loki Reacts

The forest around the Elbaf goes quiet.

XLR8 stands still for a moment.

Then—

Green light flashes.

The speed form collapses.

Ben returns to normal.

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Loki's eyes widen slightly.

For the first time—

A real reaction.

Loki:

"…You changed again."

There's no confusion.

Only deeper curiosity.

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Ben stretches his neck casually.

Ben:

"Yeah. That's kinda my thing."

Loki stares harder now.

Not at a monster.

At a human who becomes something else.

That makes it even stranger.

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Loki speaks again, voice steady.

Loki:

"I am the Sun God."

A pause.

Loki:

"The strongest creature in Elbaf."

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Luffy just grins.

But Ben doesn't react emotionally.

He analyzes.

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Ben's reasoning

Ben immediately compares:

Road → fake "god," control-based

Loki → chained, but confident

environment → layered deception

title "Sun God" used more than once

Ben narrows his eyes.

Ben:

"…Yeah, I've heard that title already."

Loki watches him closely.

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Ben continues, thinking out loud.

Ben:

"If you were really the strongest, you wouldn't be chained."

Zoro would agree with that logic.

Strength in this world usually = freedom.

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But Ben doesn't stop there.

He looks at the shackles.

Ben:

"Sea-stone chains… and you're still calm."

He studies Loki's posture.

No panic.

No weakness.

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Ben's conclusion

Ben reaches a more balanced take:

Loki might be very strong

but the "Sun God" title is not literal truth

more like:

a role

a legend

or something misunderstood

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Ben's final line:

Ben:

"…You're strong, yeah."

A short pause.

Ben:

"But I don't buy the 'god' part."

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He doesn't get impressed by titles—

he tests logic first.

Screen 4 — Ben's Take on Loki's Deal

The wind moves through the roots of the Elbaf.

Chains creak as Loki leans forward slightly, eyes locked on Monkey D. Luffy.

Loki:

"Release me… and I will destroy any pirate crew for you."

Silence.

The offer hangs in the air.

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Ben watches him carefully.

Not the words.

The intent.

The posture.

The tone.

Everything.

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Ben:

"…That's too convenient."

Luffy tilts his head.

Luffy:

"Huh?"

Ben doesn't look away from Loki.

Ben:

"No cost. No limit. Total destruction on command."

A pause.

Ben:

"That's not a deal. That's bait."

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Loki's eyes narrow slightly.

Interest growing.

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Ben steps a bit closer, still calm.

Ben:

"You don't offer that unless you want something bigger."

He glances at the chains.

Ben:

"Freedom… isn't the end goal."

Then back to Loki.

Ben:

"It's step one."

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Ben's analysis

Ben breaks it down instantly:

Loki is confident even while chained

claims absolute power

offers extreme reward with no clear condition

Conclusion:

> "He's not helping. He's positioning."

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Ben folds his arms slightly.

Ben:

"And 'destroy any crew'… that's not something Luffy even wants."

Luffy grins.

Luffy:

"Yeah. I'll beat them myself."

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Ben nods slightly.

Then looks back at Loki.

Ben:

"So no… I don't trust that deal."

A short pause.

Ben:

"Not yet."

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Final thought (Ben)

> "If he's really that strong…

letting him out without understanding him first is a mistake."

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This keeps the tension smart, not just power-based.

Screen 5 — Ben's Read: Loki vs Shanks

The air snaps the moment Loki insults Shanks.

Monkey D. Luffy doesn't hesitate.

Steam bursts out—

Gear Fourth: Boundman.

Luffy:

"Take that back."

The pressure spikes.

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Ben doesn't jump in.

He watches.

Reads.

Measures.

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Ben's assessment (in real time)

Ben looks at Loki first.

Chained. Calm. Not backing down.

No fear—even with Luffy powered up.

Ben (quietly):

"…He's not bluffing."

He notes:

Sea-stone restraints still on

posture steady

eyes focused, not reactive

That tells Ben one thing:

> "He's confident even while restricted."

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Then Ben thinks about Shanks.

What he already knows:

Yonko-level

overwhelming Haki presence

someone even top tiers don't take lightly

Ben's internal scale clicks into place.

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Ben's comparison

Ben (thinking):

> "If Shanks is at the top…

then Loki is somewhere below that—

but still dangerous."

He doesn't underestimate Loki.

But he doesn't overrate him either.

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Ben's conclusion

Ben steps slightly closer, still calm.

Ben:

"Luffy… careful."

Luffy doesn't turn.

Ben continues:

Ben:

"He's not weak."

A short pause.

Ben:

"But if he was really on Shanks' level…"

Ben glances at the chains.

Ben:

"…he wouldn't be sitting there."

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Final judgment (Ben)

Shanks = top-tier benchmark (near peak)

Loki = high-tier, unknown ceiling, currently restrained

Ben's mindset:

> "Strong enough to be dangerous.

Not proven enough to match someone like Shanks."

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This keeps the moment balanced:

Not hype, not downplay—

just clean, logical power reading.

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