I'm rewriting the early chapters and changing the direction of the story, mostly getting her to other Time Lords faster, and instead of the Time War, she gets sent to Omega, the first time lord world
I'm mostly editing or heavy change the dialogue; this was my main problem before my school break. Hopefully this won't take long, but I write like 3k words each chapter. I completely rewrote chapter 3; I changed everything and made it 2k words longer
i promise to make a better story