"T-the… the elf, My Lord?" the doctor replied, clearly faking ignorance.
Shaw barely moved his head as he shot him a glare. It was written all over his face that he didn't want to repeat himself—and he made sure the doctor noted that down.
The doctor turned halfway around to gesture to one of the other researchers. The man panicked for a moment before he showed Shaw the way to the back of the lab.
Shaw already knew the way—he was the one who built all of this. He was the one who made that safe in the back of the lab to store valuable goods. What could be more valuable than an elf?
Yes, it was one of those mystical creatures that seemed to have left the world hundreds of years ago. The head researcher stepped forward to the panel that was jutting out on the right. Blue rays shot off it as it scanned his irises. The moment it did, the room shook as the locks began to untangle themselves and push the door to the sides.
Not only was that door saving what was inside from what was out here—it was also doing the other way around.
The moment the doors slid open, a loud, high-pitched noise of metal clattering against metal resonated through the lab. The researchers felt sweat trickle down their temples as the moment unfolded. They hated every time that door opened.
Couldn't blame them. Inside felt like something else entirely—something not of Earth.
At the far end of the safe, the banging was louder. You could make out the figure of a human from this distance—a body on its knees, feet chained to each other and connected to the metallic floor, making it almost impossible to move a limb.
Its hands hung above its head, chained to the walls on either side. What made it worse was the collar that was chained down to the ground, restricting the poor being's movement. Despite all that, it still had enough power in its arms to pull against the chains, causing them to collide with each other.
Flowing pale-blonde hair fell to the ground, creating a pool underneath the elf. Its face was completely hidden from view. From the physique of the body, it appeared to be male.
The clattering stopped as it sensed the presence of its captors.
The doctors jolted to a halt as the elf raised his head, his long, silky hair falling to his temples and revealing his pale face. Not even a scratch was on his skin—despite being captive for… he had lost count. His ability to heal, for the first time in his long life, was his demise.
He felt pain over and over again, only for his body to heal like it was nothing—giving these stinking humans the right to do it all over again, these crazy tests they ran.
Shaw never stopped moving as his eyes stayed fixed on the elf in front of him. Then he stopped, tilting his head to the side as he took a closer look.
"Those eyes," said Shaw. "And I had a feeling I'd seen them before," he mumbled to himself as he gazed into the vibrant violet pupils that glared at him with murderous intent.
Not even being in chains prevented the elves from being prideful—as if they still owned the world.
"I met a boy at a banquet just now, and he had eyes of the same color," said Shaw as he walked toward the elf.
"My Lord!" the doctor called out, raising a hand in protest. "Don't get too close to it!"
None dared to take a step closer to that elf. The murderous aura he emitted every time their eyes fell on him was enough to make them wet themselves. They never knew that this research would involve a living elf.
No one there knew how Shaw Gotham had gotten his hands on him when the rest of the world believed they were nothing but a myth.
Shaw ignored the warnings and got closer to the elf, leaving barely a meter—or less—between them. He leaned forward until they were eye to eye. Shaw giggled as he straightened his back again.
He would have mistaken him for an elf himself if it weren't for his human ears. Swiftly, Shaw moved his hand faster than the elf could react—but even if he could, there was little he could do while chained like this.
Shaw grabbed the pointed ear of the elf, pulling it harshly upward. The chains of the collar clattered at the sudden tension, leaving the elf trapped between two forces.
"Those ears," Shaw said. "He didn't have those. Or maybe he could've just gotten them removed, right? It is possible in this day and age."
"Y-you…"
Shaw's eyebrow twitched in surprise that didn't show on his face. He hadn't expected it to talk.
"You think that with this fancy machinery you'll acquire a body that isn't yours?"
Despite the drugs in his system, the elf was able to speak clearly. The rage in his voice echoed off the white tiles that covered the safe built solely to keep the likes of him inside.
Shaw giggled. "I guess your body has grown tolerant to the drug? Maybe I should tell them to increase the dose?" he mumbled under his breath, but loud enough for the elf to hear.
"You're talking about getting your body?" Shaw let go of his grip, causing the elf to tumble back down to his knees. "I already got your body. I'm only seeing if there's anything more to add to him."
He gestured with his head toward the green capsule visible from the other side of the door. The elf clearly saw the body of the human inside—and he felt sorry for him.
His hate wasn't toward humans. He never hated humans—they never hated humans. He only hated this inhuman man standing before him. Pointing his rage at the entire human race didn't make sense when his target was one man.
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"T-the… the elf, My Lord?" the doctor stammered, clearly faking ignorance.
Shaw barely tilted his head as he shot him a glare. It was written all over his face that he didn't want to repeat himself—and the doctor understood that well enough.
Turning halfway around, the doctor gestured for one of the other researchers to lead the way. The man hesitated, panic flashing in his eyes, before showing Shaw toward the back of the lab.
Shaw didn't need directions. He was the one who built this place—the one who designed the reinforced vault at the back of the lab to store what he considered valuable goods. And what could be more valuable than an elf?
Yes, one of those mythical creatures that were said to have vanished from the world hundreds of years ago. The head researcher stepped up to the glowing control panel that jutted out from the right wall. Blue rays flickered to life as it scanned his irises. The moment it did, the room rumbled—the locks uncoiling and sliding apart as the massive doors began to open.
That door didn't just keep what was inside safe from the outside world. It also kept the outside world safe from what was within.
The moment the doors slid fully open, a shrill clatter of metal against metal echoed through the lab. The researchers tensed, sweat trickling down their temples. They hated this sound—they hated every time that door opened.
No one could blame them. Whatever was inside felt like it belonged to another world entirely.
At the far end of the vault, the metallic banging grew louder. A shape could be seen through the dim light—a body kneeling on the ground, its feet chained together and fixed to the steel floor, making it nearly impossible to move even an inch.
Its arms were stretched above its head, bound to the walls by heavy shackles. A thick collar chained to the ground restricted its movements further. And yet, despite all that, it still had enough strength left to pull at the restraints—forcing the chains to clash in defiance.
Long, pale-blonde hair cascaded to the ground, pooling around the captive figure. Its face was hidden behind the curtain of hair, but from the shape of its body, it was clearly male.
The clattering stopped as the elf sensed the presence of his captors.
The doctors froze when he raised his head. Silken strands of hair slid away from his temples, revealing a pale, unmarred face. Not a single scratch marked his skin—despite being held here for what felt like centuries. His gift of healing, once his greatest blessing, had become his curse.
He felt pain again and again, only for his body to heal as if nothing had happened—allowing these humans to resume their twisted experiments without end.
Shaw's steps didn't falter. His sharp eyes stayed locked on the elf until, finally, he stopped—tilting his head slightly as he examined him.
"Those eyes," Shaw murmured. "I knew I'd seen them before."
He leaned closer, studying the vibrant violet irises that glared back at him with hatred so fierce it could burn through steel. Even in chains, the elf carried himself with the same regal pride his kind was known for.
"I met a boy at a banquet just now," Shaw said, taking another step forward, "and he had eyes just like yours."
"My Lord!" the doctor called out, his voice shaking. "Don't get too close to it!"
No one dared to move closer. The elf's presence alone—the killing intent that radiated from his very being—was enough to make grown men tremble. None of them had ever imagined that this project involved a living elf.
And none of them knew how Shaw Gotham had managed to capture one, when the rest of the world believed their kind to be nothing more than myth.
Shaw ignored the doctor's plea and approached the prisoner until barely a meter separated them. He leaned in, meeting the elf's gaze directly, before straightening again with a low, amused giggle.
He would have mistaken the boy from the banquet for an elf too—if not for his human ears.
Then, in a sudden motion, Shaw's hand darted forward—too fast for the chained elf to react. He seized one of the pointed ears and yanked it upward cruelly. The collar's chain rattled under the strain, trapping the elf between two opposing forces.
"Those ears," Shaw said coldly. "He didn't have those. Or maybe he had them removed. It's possible these days, isn't it?"
"Y-you…"
Shaw's eyebrow twitched—surprised, though his expression didn't show it. He hadn't expected the creature to speak.
"You think," the elf hissed, "that with this… machinery, you'll claim a body that isn't yours?"
Despite the drugs coursing through his veins, his voice rang clear—dripping with fury. The sound of it bounced off the white-tiled walls of the containment vault, built solely to imprison beings like him.
Shaw chuckled softly. "So your body's grown tolerant to the drug? Maybe I should have them raise the dosage," he said, his tone mockingly light.
"You talk about getting your body?" Shaw released his grip, letting the elf collapse back to his knees. "I already have your body. I'm just checking if there's anything more to add to it."
He tilted his head toward the green capsule visible beyond the doorway. Inside floated the form of a young human. The elf's gaze fell upon it, sorrow flickering in his eyes.
His hatred wasn't for humankind. The elves had never hated humans.
He hated this man—this monster in human skin. Directing his wrath toward the entire race would have been meaningless when his true enemy was standing right before him.