Hi guys,
The rewrite is finally up, so do check it out.
Bloodraven : Lord of the Multiverse (Harry Potter x Omniverse)
Here are some of the things I plan to change:
First of all, after writing over a million words, I'd like to think my writing skills have improved a little, so hopefully, you're in for a more enjoyable read this time around.
Anyways, let's start with the female leads. Yes, plural. There'll be a second female lead in the future. If you can't accept that, or think it'll ruin the story, then by all means, please don't read it.
I'm certainly not going to have the MC running around catching girls like Pokémon.
The original female lead will be one of them. Sigh. I'm already too attached to her, even though she's an OC, I can't just ditch her. As for the other, I haven't decided yet. Maybe someone from Marvel, or...
I'll also be changing some of the system-related elements from the original.
Let's see, what else... ah, less filler and less cringe. At least, I'll try. Cringe is subjective, so what bothers some readers might not bother others.
Without spoiling too much, that's about as much as I can reveal.
I'll also be changing some of the system-related elements from the original.
Let's see, what else... ah, less filler and less cringe. At least, I'll try. Cringe is subjective, so what bothers some readers might not bother others.
Without spoiling too much, that's about as much as I can reveal.
As for updates, the original story will continue at a slower pace, around three chapters a week. I'll try to upload one chapter a day for the rewrite, so eventually, both versions will catch up.
Anyway, hope you enjoy the new version.