*CLICK-CLICK*
*CLICK-CLICK-CLICK*
"Damn" Really again this the third time this week slamming his hands on the steering wheel.
I just got this alternator fixed last week what's wrong with it now he thought shaking his head with a deep sigh. "I fix one thing and something else goes out"
"Hey Fen! You still having car trouble?
He looked up to see his long time friend and neighbor Sam standing in his driveway with two beers while handing one out with a cheeky grin, take it you definitely need it, he grabbed it and popped it open.
"So how's life other that that piece of shit you call a car haha"
Ha, Sam that car is the least of my problems. Takes a long swig of beer
Last week I also lost m-my mother said fen holding back his tears, he then pulled out a cigarette box lit a match and began to inhale the sweet aroma of cancer. Sam was horrified because that was almost his second mom.
Wait what! How did this happen?!
At this point fens emotions broke and he started sobbing, the police say it was a freak accident in the storm the other day she was driving and the strong winds were that bad she lost control of the car and swerved off the road into a tree.
Wow brother I'm so sorry was all Sam could say.
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2 *months later*
Fen was just laying on his bed chugging yet another beer, he looked over at the clock 8:00Am "eh it looks like I'm starting a bit late today" rolling over on his bed he grabbed a cig and starting smoking, looking around his room it's utter madness trash food, bugs, piles of cigarettes as far as the eye could see,
But fen didn't care, his whole life was nothing but disappoint abuse and negativity, he's just waiting to die. It's not just his mother passing it's failing, he failed outa college can't keep a steady job, he has two days to get out of his apartment because he can't pay the bills, he tired.
Looking out the window while taking a drag while contemplating his crappy life, he suddenly feels a sharp pain in his chest but he doesn't really panic because this is happens all the time, but it started to feel different sharp pains then difficulty breathing but through all that, he knew he was dying, but this is what he wanted To not to exist at all, and that.. that sounds good right now he thought. the pain intensified then a intense crushing pain in his chest, at a certain point his vision gradually turned black and then… and then came nothing.
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Fen lay there floating in nothingness, as he drifted Fen lost sense of time and space, it felt as if he was floating on a sea of clouds, after an unknown amount of time the darkness started to lighten. It started small but every second it grew brighter and brighter.
Squinting he turned his head to look around to his surprise, he was in a total white space, no details no nothing just white in every direction looking around confused, he suddenly spots the most beautiful woman he's ever seen, slim hour glass figure beautiful green eyes with blond hair she was glowing, you could feel the heat, pressure and majestic aura emanating off her.
Every other thought left his head, now all he could see is the beauty standing in front of him.
"Ahem.. are you done staring Fen hehe"
"Oh oh I I apologize" he said with a blushing face followed by a deep bow.
So… how does the work
"am I dead"? "And are you god?"
She paused for a second, this is the first time anyone was so composed in their death. She smiled and looked at him then spoke
Yes haha indeed you are dead, and yes I'm the god of correction and in your life cycles you have been over looked so to say.
"Huh? What do you mean" said fen
" ok I'll get to the point. You have had a tragic life, in fact 219 horrible meaningless lives, ahh welll except one but you still died tragically, anyways we gods apologize for that" she said with a guilty tone,
See you are one of the oldest mortal souls in existence, and you were the first souls created to have misfortune, in order for others to have more fortune, don't ask that's above your pay grade to understand, you were supposed to have a great life after being reborn, so us gods stopped paying attention, but you ended up with horrible fates in every life up till now
"What!…. And you said Gods? Said Fen I thought there was only one"
"Silly mortal, their are trillions of gods governing all aspects of things, haha there is even a god of all toothpicks" waste of divin power if you ask me but that's besides the point, what your thinking about is the almighty god, the god who exists outside of time and is the make and destroyer of all things"
After 10 mins of silence, the goddess spoke up again, what did that tiny bit of information blow that rice size brain of yours
"Hey!" Fen said clenching his fists.
"Calm down let's get back to what I was saying, normally if a mortal has 1 suffering life it get countered with a blessed life, but in your case it just didn't happen you can call that uh mhmm and accounting miscalculation and you have suffered for 219 consecutive life's.
So the god of reincarnation has filed for a special life on your behalf, oh and I seen in one of your life's you were an fan of the novels with systems, so I'll give you one, good luck and by!
Wait! what…. I have questio ….
Phew… thank me, hes gone.. if he would have stayed any longer he could have sued me and took my divinity.
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Before he could process what was going on his vision went black for what felt like years no sense of time or space. Then a bright light apeard following by floating textes welcome to the GOD Abode, please select your appearance. A model appeared in front of him it was a naked version of him self, note: user can manipulate every aspect of yourself to what you'd want. Including physical, mental, spiritual, bloodlines, comprehension.
Fen stared in awe just now fully comprehending the opportunity in front of him, he's getting a second chance at life also getting a system. Fen did what any male would do in his situation… I want a huge dong sets his size to about 8 inches, oh yeah he says with a smile, then he moves on to the rest, perfect body, charm maxed out comprehension fully maxed out strength maxed, agility maxed, stamina maxed,
Looking at his new body in the mirror Fen likes what he sees pure white hair, blue eyes chiseled like a statue and over 195 cm
Satisfied what what he sees Fen confirms his selection to enter the world of okael. After he confirms he's immediately tossed into a vortex of colors it felt like his insides were twisting at unnatural angles, but after a couple mins of agony. Fen slams hard on the ground, bright sun pouring into his eyes.
He sits up looks around disoriented, and what he sees shocks him flowers perfectly cultivated as far as the eye can see perfectly manage forests, tigers running along side deer, playing like their friends, dragon flies as a book, then he turnes to his right to see a waterfall flowing horizontally defying the laws that he knows.
*ding!* initializing 1% 34% 76% 100%
Welcome to the bloodline creation system
Error Error Error. Present from goddess, jailbroken system complete, Host now has full creative control over the system.
What? Surprised, he says "status" a blue screen pops up with yellow letters flashing saying jailbroken not sure what that means he scrolls down
Name: Fen Pinehelm
Age: 18
Cultivation: None
Intelligence: 100
Stamina: 100
Strength: 100
Charm: 100/100 Max
Legendary bloodlines created: None by
Guegurgle gurgle.
I'll check out the features of the system after I eat, an hour later and after some berrys fen realized
"Wow I really have a system and was transmigrated, ok then where are my broken maridans and family that hates my guts?"
He feels confused because this is not how he thought this would go?
Looking around He notices the air here seems to feel energized, full of life Fen then gets up feeling fully energized, "it feels like I could punch through a mountain" he said to him self.
"Thats because you can "
"Huh? who said that!" Fen turned around with his fists up, haha put them down boy, you can't harm me, and fen just instantly the man was right, he was standing right in fort of him and he didn't sense him at all,
Hi Fen Pinehelm I've been waiting for you for a long time.. welcome to you new home GOD ABODE.