Hi, anyone who still has this in their library.
So, I started rewriting this, then realized I did not like a lot about the Marvel Universe, sooo I made my own one, with its own universal laws ext.
It's own creation god, that will be a story in the future.
If you liked this one, I am not sure you will like the new one. Apoc starts a lot weaker, but also stronger. I took away powers, then made use of what I left him with properly, and honestly, I was shocked.
I am up to Ch 19 at the moment and want a decent amount before I release, but wanted to give you a heads up.
Addition:
Those who still recall my stories will recall I am not English, and many of you had to correct my grammar, spelling, and phrasing.
This time I took the original Afrikaans and changed a lot. I made the MC start off almost robotic after speaking to my son, who studied psychology. I feel I made better use of the early years and did not start off all-powerful, as above; remember this is an AU.
Then I asked an AI to translate; that was initially a mistake. I knew nothing about working with them, and a lot of what I wrote got condensed. I noticed this at ch10 when I did a proofread, so the first 10 are short.
Next, I noticed it does not (did not then) handle Afrikaans well; when I asked, it told me it is one of the hardest languages to translate, so I made it question everything it had multiple options for. Anyways, I think it reads okay, although maybe a little more impersonal than I wanted, but I am reading from a non-English standpoint. (Yes, I can write this okay, but it takes ages, and Grammarly wanted to kick me afterwards, much easier doing it my way)
So, question: I want to put the first 10 chapters here and get your opinion. If it sucks, I can just start over. I only have about 35 done at the moment.
I am putting Ch. 1 on the next page so you can have a sample; let me know your thoughts.